Tantalizing Tuesday time. The day of the week when a group of awesome writers write 200 word teasers inspired by a picture of their own choosing. Each one deserves a read and comment. So treat yourself, click the links and enjoy a good read. This week my teaser is called Rosemary. I hope you enjoy reading it
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Unaware of the two pairs of eyes that watched her, Rosemary walked around the hotel swimming pool to where she had spotted the only spare sun lounger. She picked her way through the other sunbathers and took care not to disturb them.
The brand new swimsuit clung to Rosemary’s body and outlined her slender figure. She walked with an accentuated sway to her hips. Tim nudged Pete from their watchful position on the rooftop bar.
“She’s a bit of alright!”
Pete laughed. “You can’t even see her face; she has that big hat on.”
Rosemary had donned a huge brimmed straw hat that protected her head from the fierce afternoon sun.
She looked at the pool and contemplated having a swim later, but for now however, just wanted to relax. She put her drink and sunglasses down. Then eased herself down onto the lounger and shut her eyes.
Pete grinned. “Bet you a pint she’ll talk to me.”
“Go on then, you’re on.”
Tim watched his friend go down and chat to Rosemary. He returned back to claim his pint, but Tim looked again at Rosemary who waved. He waved back and only then realized exactly who the woman was.
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Julez S Morbius: http://morbiussworld.blogspot.co.uk/
Don Abdul: http://don-abdul.blogspot.com
Cg Brumby: http://www.cgbrumby.blogspot.com.au/2012/06/cg-brumby-twilight-fantasies-cg-brumby.html
Madison J Edwards: http://madisonedwards.blogspot.com
Molly Synthia: http://mollysyntha.com
Veronica Fredricks: http://authorveronicafredricks.blogspot.com
Dianne Hartsock http://diannehartsock.wordpress.com/tantalizing-tuesday-7/
Venus Cahill: http://www.venusbookluvr.blogspot.com
Cyril J. Michael: http://authorcyriljmichaels.blogspot.com
Cassandre Dayne http://cassandredayne.wordpress.com/
Benjamin T. Russell http://incubuschronicles.blogspot.com/
Leann Mitchell http://leannmitchell.blogspot.com/
Bonni Sansom: http://bonnisansom.blogspot.com/
Ray Sostre: http://theafterdarkworld.blogspot.com/
Gemma Parkes: http://gemmaparkes.blogspot.com/
Who is she? A sister, a friend, or an ex girlfreind????? You certainly teased me. I wanted more. Excellent post!
You’ll never know. LOL Glad you were teased 😉
LOL, I liked it. But yeah, who is this woman?
I leave that one to your imagination 🙂
Naomi! You really know how to tease! Great story telling!
Thanks glad you enjoyed 🙂
Great story here! Fabulous Teaser!
So glad you liked it
Oh damn. Now I want to know who she is. I she his mother? His sister? His aunt? What a clif hanger! Loved your teaser!
Aha, but that would be telling 😉
Fantastic post, you have completely teased me!
Glad you liked it 🙂
Fabulous TTT! I love the story you created and I’m dying to know who she is.
Glad I teased you lol
Oh, this is so cool, I adore flash fiction with a twist at the end. Oh Lordie, what if it’s the other man’s wife or girlfriend? There are endless scenarios for what might happen next.
Bravo Ms. N., I loved it
I thought of telling you, but then felt it would be better to keep you guessing. I got the desired effect that way, glad you enjoyed 🙂
Who was she??? I want to know! lol Ah, such a lovely tease, Naomi. I thoroughly enjoyed being pulled into the story. I wanted to find out who she was! lol Super teased now. You have to write this tease into a short story – Pleeeeease? ^_^
I think I might just do that. With a few more teases in it 😉
So unfair! Making us guess who she is. He must know her. Wonder if she’s an old girlfriend or the girl of his dreams… Great tease!
I’m so glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Now that is a TEASE. Who is she? I have to know. Excellent
I may let on – someday Glad you liked it 🙂
Mmmm… what a tease, leaves me wondering who the mysterious Rosemary might be… I’d wager she is his boss. LOL
Tantalizing possibilities too, if only you’d do the right thing and give us more 🙂
Hmmm I’ll think on it 🙂 Glad you enjoyed