Tantalizing Tuesday – 19 June: Looking On

Tuesday once more! A time for talented authors to gather and show how it is possible to write an awesome teaser inspired by a picture in two hundred words. No more, no less. All are worth reading and commenting on. So click the links and show some love. This week my teaser is called Looking On Hope you like it.


Lana sat on the cream velour stool and looked into the mirror while she applied make- up. The evening sun shone through a small window, and sparkling beams danced round her golden locks.  Sam had promised to take her to meet ‘the parents’ tonight. She wanted to look her best. Unaware of her lover just outside of the bedroom, she carried on.

Sam watched with eyes that drank in every inch of the woman clad only in underwear. The pink lacy bra emphasized perfectly formed breasts that moved seductively. Matching pink lace panties crowned her shapely ass.

Lana scanned the lip pencils and picked out a rose coloured one. She skilfully wound the pencil around her plump lips and created a fine pink edge to them.

Lana shifted position and slipped a hand between her legs.  She touched her crotch and purred. A gentle finger rubbed with circular movements.

Temptation got the better of Sam who longed to touch and moved forward to see more.

The floorboard creaked. Lana looked up and noticed Sam, who blew her a kiss.

“I love you Lana.”

“I love you too Samantha.”

“I want you tonight honey. I’ll phone and put my parents off.”


Hope I teased you 😉

Bonni Sansom: http://bonnisansom.blogspot.com/

Cg Brumby: http://cgbrumby.blogspot.com.au/p/tantalizing-tuesdays.html

Don Abdul: http://don-abdul.blogspot.com

Molly Synthia: http://mollysynthia.com

Sherry M. Palmer: http://michellechatton.blogspot.com

Cyril J. Michael: http://authorcyriljmichaels.blogspot.com

Dianne Hartsock: http://diannehartsock.wordpress.com/tantalizing-tuesday-2/

Venus Cahill: http://www.venusbookluvr.blogspot.com

Veronica Fredricks: http://authorveronicafredricks.blogspot.com

Angelica Dawson: http://angelicadawson.blogspot.com

Julez S Morbius: http://morbiussworld.blogspot.co.uk/

Gemma Parkes: http://gemmaparkes.blogspot.com/

ER Pierce http://www.erpierce.com


About naomi

Reading these fantasies is like looking through a window into my soul. :)

Posted on June 19, 2012, in Welcome. Bookmark the permalink. 22 Comments.

  1. Great Tease Naomi wasn’t expecting the twist

  2. Very sweet! Sam seems to adore her. I like that. 🙂

  3. Okay. I am definitely teased! Great way to build the tension and just wonderful the way you did it all with a completely innocuous non-sexual photo! Fabulous.

  4. How tantalizing Naomi. I loved how you baited us into thinking Sam might be a man until the very last moment. Neat!

  5. angelicadawson

    Hehe. But but, meet the parents! 🙂

  6. Awesome visual tease! Well done 🙂

  7. Fantastic tease! I want her to meet the parents too!!

  8. Steamy tease! Loved the twist, very nicely done.

  9. Fantastic TTT! Think you have a great idea for a story here.

  10. Loved the little twist, l did not see that coming! Beautifully described post!

  11. Loved it Naomi!! What a great twist!

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