It’s Tantalizing Tuesday time. I love it. When a group of talented writers choose a picture and write a teaser inspired by it. Two hundred words, no more no less. The stories are wonderful, grab a few minutes reading time, get comfortable and enjoy.
Thank you for reading mine. I hope you will leave a comment. Links to other teasers listed below.
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Time To Change
Bella was just stepping out of the shower when she heard him.
“Goodbye! I’m going out with the lads. Don’t wait up!”
The door slammed as Wade went out of the house. She flinched for a moment, then thought, I don’t give a damn anymore … I’m fed up of those words. Tonight is my night. He can do what he likes.
She looked in the mirror remembering numerous diets. She thought about all the times she had tried unsuccessfully to regain Wade’s love. No more. After deciding to make the best for herself, her happiness and confidence soared.
Bella carefully dressed in the provocative outfit. Applying final touches to her hair and face, she stood tall, saying, “Go get ‘em girl.”
Wade met his friends at a local pub. After downing some beers, they decided to go on to a nightclub in the hope of getting lucky.
“Hey, let’s go to “The Peacock.” One said. “There’s a show tonight.”
Inside the men sat and listened as music started and the act announced.
“Tonight, welcome a star. Everyone’s favourite Burlesque Queen, Bella!”
Bella launched into her routine to a cheering audience.
Wade thought, I’m such an idiot, I’ll lose her.
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Julez S Morbius: http://morbiussworld.blogspot.co.uk/
Lee Brazil: http://leebrazilauthor.blogspot.com
Sherry Palmer: http://michellechatton.blogspot.ca
Venus Cahill: http://venusbookluvr.blogspot.ca
Muffy WIlson: http://muffywilson.blogspot.com
Molly Synthia: http://mollysynthia.com
Don Abdul: http://don-abdul.blogspot.com/
Kharisma Rhayne: http://www.kharismarhayne.com/
Dianne Hartsock: http://diannehartsock.wordpress.com/tantalizing-tuesday-4/
ER Pierce: http://www.erpierce.com
Havan Fellows: http://havanshawthaven.blogspot.com/
Cyril J. Michael: http://authorcyriljmichaels.blogspot.ca/
Gemma Parkes: http://gemmaparkes.blogspot.com/
Cassandre Dayne: http://cassandredayne.wordpress.com/
Bonni Sansom: http://bonnisansom.blogspot.com/
Ray Sostre: http://theafterdarkworld.blogspot.com/
Benjamin Russell: http://incubuschronicles.blogspot.com/
Ah ha! Bella made the right choice and just might end up getting everything she wants. Very nice!
I want the lady to shine. Thank you 🙂
Sounds like someone might have some fun 😀 Love it.
Oh I’m sure of it. 😉
I loved this, Naomi. Let the unappreciated woman reign supreme, and Wade can just eat it. 😛 It’s sad, sometimes, the lengths women must go through to remind their partner that they are *worth* their time, attention, and affection. At times we find ourselves in relationships that sap our confidence, strength, and even self-worth from us, and I loved that Bella had the guts to say No Way to this having that effect on her! Great post, Naomi!
Sometimes we have to remember to think of our own feelings. Bella had the right idea. Thanks for commenting 🙂
Way to go Bella. I love this teaser for all it is, all it promises, and the hope it lets shine through.
No woman should be unhappy, and some men need to open their eyes. Glad you enjoyed
Excellent piece. Really enjoyed it
Thanks. Pleased you liked it
Go Bella! He deserves to lose her.
She’s finding the strength at last to enjoy life. Glad you enjoyed 🙂
Yes he is and hopefully, yes he will! Great story telling!
Thank you. Pleased you liked it
Good for her, I’m glad she stood up for herself, and is doing what pleases her. Wade sounds like a douchebag
He is LOL and he may well lose her
Bella, Bella, Bella…..no clinging vine you!! WOnderful post! Empowering and wonderfully written.:) xo
Thanks glad you enjoyed 😉
Good for her. The putz should lose her. She deserves better. Excellent TTT.
LOL yes. Love that word putz
Fabulous TTT! I’m a fan of the curvy gal story and this one is fantastic, Hope Wade realizes how good he has it.
He’s mad if he doesn’t. She’s quite a gal 🙂
Fantastic pic and even better Teaser!
Thanks, glad you liked both 🙂
Awesome job, I absolutely loved it. Good on her, time for him to wake or lose out. I love her attitude and the way you made sure Wade knew what he was going to be missing. Rocked Ms Naomi.
He needed to be shown. Glad you enjoyed 🙂
Poor Wade, he probably wet his pants when he recognized Bella on stage. Ah, this TTT has so many connotations. Of course, everyone’s first inclination is to paint Ole Wade as the bad guy, but what if there was something else going on that made him act the way he did? Very Good Ms. Naomi, I like it – because it makes me think about all the different scenarios. Bravo
Ah yes, something can be created out of this one. Glad you enjoyed 🙂
Wow – I missed this last week…but you know what – screw him. If he can’t love Bella for being herself than he doesn’t deserve to call her his. Love this TT! ❤ Very moving 🙂
Thanks hon 🙂 glad you liked it