Sunday Snippet – 13 May: The Ring

This Sunday sees a snippet of Rosemary. Alone, frustrated and stressed, she tries to relieve tension in a bath. 


The past week had been a traumatic one, Jake had been no comfort to her at all, and Rosemary felt neglected.  Having her doubts about Jake, she was not sure there was any love left. Rosemary wished she had a partner with more compassion, who would always be there for her. As the warm water swirled over her front, she imagined the gentle fingers of a lover massaging her from the neck and shoulders down.

She smiled, watching her hard red nipples bob; just visible, deepening in colour, in contrast to the soft swells of her pale pert breasts. She arched her back, aroused by the waters sensual caressing.

Her eyes rolled back beneath fluttering eyelids, and Rosemary moaned softly, the buoyancy lifting her legs. Fingers gently running down her body, barely touching, just as a lovers fingers would until she reached her labia. There, she spread her lips and stroked, moaning louder as electricity sparks raced round her, from the ends of  curling toes to the tips of her tingling fingers. Drawing her legs up and bending her knees, she spread her legs.


Shallow breaths caused her breasts to ebb alarmingly. Beads of perspiration washed away automatically in the exertion. Her long flowing chestnut hair was soaking and stuck to her head. Quivering legs thrashed, her feet hitting the end of the bath. Rosemary’s moans turned into loud groans as she rubbed faster, almost at the point of orgasm.


This is first draft only. What do you think?


About naomi

Reading these fantasies is like looking through a window into my soul. :)

Posted on May 13, 2012, in Sunday Snippets. Bookmark the permalink. 10 Comments.

  1. Michael Hartsfield


  2. Sherry Palmer/Michelle Chatton

    Awesome writing and very erotic. Did a great job with just a few words. 🙂

  3. It sounds fabulous, very erotic!! I love it! Two thumbs up! Always love sexy bath time… 😉 thank you for sharing with the rest of us!

  4. Bubbles and playtime…always a sexy combo! I enjoyed your TT, Naomi!

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